Home Strech.... again

I have to do one short assignment, read and respond to two people's rough drafts and then get my paper into shape. Mine is going to take more time than I originally thought, it's kind of all over the place.

I need more sources that support my position, though I think there is one I didn't utilize enough. The peer feedback was actually more helpful than I thought it would be. I did cancel all appointments this week so I can concentrate on making this an 'A' paper so hopefully I can pull a B or so in this class.